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Moments out of time by ~firm-boy:iconfirm-boy:



August 24th 1993

The beginning of spring
We left school early
Ice creams and a walk in the park
Dad had to explain, Amy’s very young
I walk off alone
“Granddad died this morning”
Life’s never been the same


May 20th 2003

Trips through the city
Walking all day
Trains and buses
I first kissed her at the station
The train arrived to soon


December 2nd 1999

A heavy heart
A whispered word
A last glance
These people shaped my life
Most I never saw again


April 4th 2003

You don’t have a license
Iris on the radio
We walk the last mile.

Lying together, the sun goes down
I’m too nervous to move
You hold my hand tight
I just want you to know who I am


January 29th 2004

Whispers through a tent flap
A girl who thinks I'm funny.

My friend strikes me
Again and again
nose bleeds a little
What just happened, Why?
I didn’t talk anymore that night


December 31st 1989

Mum and dad are inside
The party goes on
So this is what midnight feels like
I fell asleep on the grass


February 14th 2004

Strange faces, places
I'm there just for her.
A laughing stock
The joke is on me.

The worst night
Love that never was.

I crashed my car on the way home
©2007-2009 ~firm-boy
:iconfirm-boy:

Author's Comments

I haven't written anything in years it seems.
I'm no poet, but i couldn't sleep and had an urge to write something.

I had these dates in my head, i know there not in order or evenly spaced over time... What can i say. Some things stick with you more than others.

...I still remember

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:icongingerpeace:
Thats agood way of expressing yourself man. It's quite simple and neat - whereas being a songwriter I continually think of all of these metaphors to confuse people. It's nice.

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Way too cool for shameless self promotion.

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:iconfirm-boy:
Your songs rock though... speaking of which.. hows peacefire going ?

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All I know is that I don't know nothin'
:icongingerpeace:
peacefire is going very well - we've almost got a set list together

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Way too cool for shameless self promotion.

OMG!! CLICK HERE -->[link]
:iconcrimson-stains:
I really like this adam. Your right things stick sometimes. And months seem like an eternity.....

Yeah very nice. Your a great writer.

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The cure for boredom is curiosity. There is no cure for curiosity
- Dorothy Parker (attributed).
:iconfirm-boy:
thanks... its good to hear from you

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All I know is that I don't know nothin'
:iconcrimson-stains:
Yeah its been a crazy few months for me. So how you been?

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The cure for boredom is curiosity. There is no cure for curiosity
- Dorothy Parker (attributed).
:iconfirm-boy:
up and down.. here and there

im bored with holidays

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All I know is that I don't know nothin'
:iconcrimson-stains:
yeah... Im looking forward to going back to uni. Learn something lol

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The cure for boredom is curiosity. There is no cure for curiosity
- Dorothy Parker (attributed).
:icondaylightfading:
i am extremely impressed. i definitely think this is the best youve written. that i've read at least.

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~there's so much beauty it could make you cry~

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